[In stepped David, Winston, Skippy, Silas, Paige, Francisco, Benny, Sam, Chaz, and Bobby. Angus: Oh do tell. "No," Lucy, the goth said, "Since you don't want us to be here, you can go up to the room and pack everything by yourselves." He even then flips over and smashes the trophy case. Keep on writing fics like this! News flash; I live here!". Lincoln: Shut up, you loud-mouthed dope! I hate grave digging and poems and I HATE DESPICABLE SPORTS!!! They started running towards them as fast as possible, when suddenly, the sound of a fist pounding against the door is heard. But worse than that, I was being a horrible sister!" I can't believe I told him to back away from his own home! Sighing, Rita turns to her children and said, "Look I know Aunt Ruth isn't your favorite relative" She was interrupted by Lynn Jr. saying, "That's the understatement of the century." Ruth yelled, "I DON'T WANT YOU OR YOUR UNGRATEFUL BRATS OR YOUR MANCHILD HUSBAND ANYWHERE NEAR MY HOUSE AGAIN? "Room 5," Felix answered with, "On the 11th floor." Guess they forgot to lock the windows. Lincoln: I've had enough of this stupid costume! helluvaboss. (cries). "But she's still family," Rita added in, "And family stick together no matter what." You're all insane!!! Lincoln: (to the viewers) Welp, I may be forced to stay here for quite a long time, but at least I finally got away from my so-called "family"! SQUIRRELS WIN! You're nothing, but an embarrassment to sports. ", Lisa: "And if it's any consolation, you weren't the only one who should've thought about what you were doing. Also, her kids weren't wrong about the pudding, that stuff was so vile it would turn her stomach into a BMX dirt track for days, so the kids' decision had its positives after all. I hope you enjoy, please try to be as gentle yet honest as possible as to what you think about the story (this is my first fanfiction in general). Those honors go to Nickelodeon, Teletoon, Chris Savino, Stephen Hillenberg, John A. Davis, Louis Sachar and Gold Cartoonist (who is located on fanfiction). Luna, Luan, Lola and Lisa were just about ready to ram these three rude jerks with the couch in the room. I'll never be able to play games the best way again! Just so you know, in case you ask about that). WE'RE BRUTES!!! "Yeah they did," Luan responded with. Lucy: Well, you covered for me and saved me from all this non-stop torment. She told the kids that their parents caused them to get kicked out, she told them what they did and, in a sense, she was responsible for the kids' destructive rampage. "Two outs in the bottom of the ninth, and the bases are loaded. Perhaps i was wrong to fall for such a deception, even for my age group. And with that, Lori started driving the van out of the hotel and back towards their house. House of Lies alt ending14. "What do you kids want?" With that, the parents just held each other for the remainder of the night, promising to do whatever it took to earn back their children's trust. ", [Margo takes a swing and flings herself into the umpire and the bat hits her helmet. ", Lincoln: "Lynn, don't say that. After a minute, "Hello," the gruff sound of their Aunt Ruth was heard. Lola: Hey, Lincoln! How can I help you?" I don't need you chumps at my stupid games! YOU'LL BE HAPPY TO KNOW YOU WON'T HAVE TO WORRY ABOUT DEALING WITH ME OR MY CATS OR MY DISGUSTING PUDDING OR MY BUNIONS ANYMORE! How can I help you?" Lynn has a bruised cheek and the rest are all still coated in muck and wet from the sea. "What," Felix said, "what is it?" "WE HATE YOUR DISGUSTING PUDDING!" And with that, they headed towards the lobby. Years after his death, Lincoln is given the opportunity to see how his sisters are doing. "What's wrong with Aunt Ruth?" Lynn Sr. asked. I hate the fact that you all act like spoiled brats! Luna: I can't believe we made him feel as if we can't feel anymore or that we don't love and care for him. Maybe I should just quit the team. Lincoln and Lucy were dealing with a fictional ghost. Lincoln: Throughout my life, ive been teased, laughed at, kicked out of rooms, blamed, grounded for petty reasons and done so many humiliating deeds for all of you! "Not cool, guys." Honest! Do I mean nothing to you? [shows the score: Hazeltuck Lions: 3, Royal Woods Squirrels: nothing.] I hate concerts! This Fanfic is a MASSIVE critique on every fanfic that is targeting the Episode "No Such Luck" of the Western Animation Series "The Loud House." Also it is part Satire, so most of the behavior of the Characters appearing here may not be their usual self's. If you like all the Revenge-Fics who like to torment Lincoln's family and/or present his . Lincoln: (marches up to Lynn) Straight from you, you big bully! Start talking. EVER!! "Nah, Aunt Ruth," Luna said, "you're gonna wanna listen to this." And he did not look happy. She turned to face her parents, a massive glare on her face, and Lola added, "And it's all mom and dad's fault." loud. (They arrive home. Share your thoughts, experiences, and stories behind the art. I feel like a fool! "YOU HEARD HER!" the family opens the door to see a ticked off Lincoln. After half an hour, Lincoln begins to sweat like crazy and lose his mind. ", Lucy: "We don't care, we'll watch anything you want. I've had an account on this website for about a year and a half now and this is the first story I'm doing for it. I hate that you put your own lame pride and wants above everything else! But that's only because we don't have a room anymore." Share your thoughts, experiences, and stories behind the art. ), Lynn Sr.: "Get ready kids, we're going to the movies again, but Lincoln is coming with us. I cant take a moment more of this! Share your thoughts, experiences, and stories behind the art. We should thought about it ourselves before jumping to a preposterous conclusion that you were bad luck. Theres nothing lucky about it! Rita: Sweetie, calm down. In. The siblings glared at her for a moment but saw she had a point, it didn't make sense to ground her or Lily for that matter, she was a baby, anything she did wasn't entirely her fault. ", Lincoln: "Oh, and I'm sorry for breaking your golf clubs, Lori. Wow, Lincoln, I'm really sorry. Opening the door slightly, Luna stuck her head out and saw a man, somewhere in his early 30's with Caucasian skin and short brown hair, wearing a security uniform. Why? You tricked us in the first place. I hate that you made me feel like an outcast! Plot. Fund your creativity by creating subscription tiers. But we have to know, how the heck have you been able to scoop us?" Katherine: With help from my boyfriend. Lynn Sr: We promise to never do it again! Hearing that made the parents sigh in disappointment, they should've known their kids would break things and hoped the bill wouldn't be that much, but also knew that odds were that the bill was going to be massive. I do it almost everyday, and it'snot that I hate going to them or don't want to support you, butsometimes, I wanted to take a break form all that, you know,unwind. They were thinking that they should've told their kids no and that they were going to stay at Aunt Ruth's for the weekend. Lynn Loud steps up to the plate, but with the luck she's been having today, the Squirrels are looking a whole lot like roadkill. Lana: (sniffles) Butthese were all our pride and joy! "Wait, what are you saying?" ", Rita: "And tomorrow, we're going to the beach." Rita: Lincoln?! We're supposed to be here until tomorrow. Lola: Me too! Lincoln: Girls! ", Lincoln: "Just hear me out." White hair extended ending9. Also please don't flame me. Lisa: I have truly disgraced the scientific community Lola: Does this mean Linky doesn't love us anymore? The entire lobby was destroyed, couches were stomped beyond recognition, lamps and desks were thrown and broken, hotel luggage carts were somehow damaged beyond repair and some people were hurt (another author interruption sorry: not severely, mind you, but enough that they were going to feel pain tomorrow and the next few days). The squirrel mascot is dancing a little less energetic than usual. (Luna gasps) You all dont quite grasp the concept! ", (and that did it. ", Lincoln: "Well Luna, we all make mistakes. We get it. Lincoln: (tearful) No! Everyone finally realized that what they've done. Morag: Not stuck in your sister's shadows. While eating breakfast, Lincoln learns from his sisters that they have planned activities later in the day. Honey, we're back. Felix got up to see the siblings storming downstairs, ready to give their parents a piece of their mind without a care for who or what gets broken in the process. We just thought you were bad luck, we didnt mean to upset you like this. There's a massive storm heading your way." Lynn Sr.: Son..we didn't mean to..we just.we were wrong to-. Computer typing was heard yet again and, after a few moments. You can't ground us, we're the parents!" I-, Lincoln: "LYNN!" Hahahaha! Lynn: Let go of me you crazy, raging brute! But the woman did, "That your parents were caught skinny dipping after hours? Lucy: Lincoln, stop! First, if they are to go on vacation by themselves, they let the kids stay at home, second, they agree to bring swimwear and wear when going for a late night swim, three, if the place they stay at is great then they go there for a family vacation in the future and four, no more visits to Aunt Ruth's. Especially Miss. They kick and punch and claw at each other for several minutes until Lincoln picks Lynn up.). I hate softball! And even if you don't always succeed, your a good at it. WE MAKE EVERYTHING WORSE!!! Our parents grounded us to this room because we got in trouble yesterday. I only told Leni, Luan, Lana, Lola and Lily. "They're not the only guilty ones," Lynn, the girl in red with brown hair tied in a ponytail, responded back with, in a bit of wise-cracking tone, "Yesterday, Lana and I broke the elevators. You're not even a real family anymore and I HATE that! Fade to the sisters all waking up from their nightmares. Find out what other deviants think - about anything at all. He brought the talkie down to his level and said into it, "Wait. Despite the pain his body was in, Felix grabbed his walkie talkie and said, "Maddie." the goth girl added. Need i remind you looneys that its against the law to not shelter one of your own and what am i supposed to do now that all my belongings are gone!? it is true that the Duke's actions were noble and his heart was stout, but he held doubts of his. Ronnie Anne sees Lincoln kicked out of his home and decides to take him out of there. The minute after those words left Luna's lips, the security officer leaned his face in front of Luna's and responded with, "You can help me by letting me into your room. And when Maddie got up from the desk, what she saw horrified her. Leni: Linky, dont shout. Knowing they sealed the deal and there's no way they will ever have to go back to Aunt Ruth's, Lincoln said, "Well so long, freakshow. "I know you're headstrong sometimes, but I know that deep down in your heart, you love me. Lisa: Easy, easy! "Sigh. #The loud house #lincoln loud #lori loud #leni loud #luna loud #Luan Loud #Lynn Loud #Lucy Loud #lana loud #lola loud #lisa loud #lily loud #the loud house headcanons #the loud . Lynn: FINE! Morag: well, if you insist I suppose. Tell the community what's on your mind. What's going on here?! The Loud House No Such Luck Altern. Lynn: Put that suit back on Lincoln! Lana: What did you expect us to do Lincoln? except in this story, the family never believed that he was bad luck in the first place. Lincoln: Now THAT'S bad luck for you, you brainless nitwits!! Rita: Sweetie, please! Lincoln: But you were all so gullible and stupid! And Lori and Lisa. Literature. I hate that you never listen to reason! I just got so mad, that I stopped thinking and gave him a stupid idea and made us all push him away and lose almost everything. (The family submerge, coughing up water, covered in seaweed and muck, their sunnies, hats and sandals floating in the water and their swimsuits in tatters. YOU'RE BANNED! I've gotten complaints of loud noises, stuff breaking and a possible brawl breaking out in one hotel room. And with that the parents ran into the room and closed the door. "Listen to what?" Today I'm doing a new story called 'Hall Monster Linka,' as you can tell this a story that features Linka Loud and her brothers. Lynn Sr.: I can't believe we messed up so bad like this! I'm the Duke! Lynn Sr.: Look, son, families will have bad days every now and than. She's trying to say she was wrong, but her mouth is pathologically incapable of saying those words. Youre our brother! Suite and Sour / Back in Black. it shows how badly Lincoln was treated by his family. The End. "So," Lori started with, in an icy tone, "Let's recall what we promised you when you agreed to take us on vacation." Luna, Luan, Lola and Lisa were battling off against three obnoxious hotel guests that made all of them look like saints. So we've been in here trying to pass the time. Lynn Sr.: KIDS, please! What seems to be the problem?" Sam: Luna, I got your letter. I guess this proves it! I'm not bad luck. Lead walls will keep my bad luck from affecting anyone. ", Lincoln: "Guys, it's me!" During that time, the parents spent time talking to each of their children and spending time with them during their activities. ], Baseball Announcer:[clinging to Pep]"SQUIRRELS WIN! (Cries) All my precious tiaras. The important thing is that we learn from them. ", (the sisters cheers. The Loud House Encyclopedia is a FANDOM TV Community. "Which room number is it?" ", Lincoln: (nervously) "Well, there is this new Ace Savvy movie that just came out, but I know none of you like Ace Savvy like I do. Luan then walked up to Leni and whispered into her ear. Ruth shouted back, insulted. We wont! I hate that you don't care about anyone, but yourselves! ", Lincoln: "Thanks. Two of Lincoln's comics have references on them: The one he reads first has Mr. "It looks like the room is being occupied by a Mr. Todd Fowler, Kyle Dawson and Miguel Diaz as of this morning." Are you no longer grounded to the room?" Thats what my problem is! The family and Bobby are there to support Lynn. Patching Things Up / Cheater by the Dozen. I hate fashion shows! I feel like a fool!" Lynn Sr.: (with a broken voice) "And we were horrible parents to you, locking you out! Lincoln: FIIIIIIIIIIIIIIINNNNNNNNEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!! As the last of the guests ran away, Leni, the blonde girl that one of the guys mentioned earlier, came around the corner and saw her family in the spa. I'M A STUPID, SENSELESS BULLY!!! The Loud House: No Such Luck Alternate Ending Add to Favourites By HaileyKittydoesart Published: Mar 31, 2021 Favourites Comment 4K Views "I'm not bad luck!" Lincoln said in a megaphone, he was done with sleeping outside and eating acorns to survive. Lincoln, you are now free to come back into the house.". (With his remaining strength, he scrambles over to the house. (He walks back and forth to get attention) You guys have spent the whole weekend obsessing over this ridiculous good luck/bad luck thing at my expense! At least this thick skin won't let me down! ", Lori: (with a broken voice) "What kind of monsters are we?!". Rita asked. Ever again. It centers around an Alternate Timeline involving the events of the infamous episode "No Such Luck", where the Loud family thought that Lincoln was bad luck. Lynn: *Gasp* NOOOOOO!!!!! Rita: Honey, please. (They keep searching the house. Morag: is it now? Its a stupid mascot costume! (Lynn stops) "I forgive you. # 17. the loud kamen rider by Dratinibro. Lincoln: Lana. He just looks away as he enters the police car, and is driven away to jail. It spawned dozens of fanfics about it, and caused his whiny fanbase to go haywire on the sisters. "What she said is, that you two are grounded for two months and you can only leave this house to head to work or to go to the supermarket." ", Lincoln:[scared] "Lynn's right! He then grabs one of the sofa cushions and screams all his frustration into it.). I didn't think you guys would believe I was bad luck, even going as far as to lock me out. (tears up.). Ive been a really nice guy with you for far too long! ", Leni: (with a sad look on her face) "No. Okay look, answer me these questions! MLP - Twilight Sparkle, Applejack and Pinkie. The last one he is shown reading has the Ninja Steel Rangers from Power Rangers Ninja Steel on the cover. I let my pride get the best to me! YOU ROCKED IT, LYNN-SANITY! My family learned not to let something as stupid as superstitions get to them and tear us apart, and I learned to just be honest about things like this instead of convincing them about something ridiculous just take a break from going to certain events. Lincoln: I admit, it was stupid of me to drag that lie on, but while i learn an important lesson not to be a fibber more than i needed, what do you numbnuts learn!? (Lincoln picks up the head and jumps up and down on it several times.). The Loud House Encyclopedia is a FANDOM TV Community. Lincoln said, as tears started forming in his eyes. "Lynn," Rita said, as she rose her head to meet with his, "Be honest with me, do you think we can earn our kids' trust back?" [Lynn Sr. teared up and he burst into tears at the heartwarming moment.] And she knew it wasn't about any massive gathering of one group for some kind of event because she would've been notified way ahead of time. Not you or Lucy. Lori yelled. Our family wouldn't be a family without-. "Yeah, we literally got kicked out of the room," Lori started with, also angry, "BECAUSE OF YOU!!!" Rita tried to say something, but she couldn't. ", Lincoln: "Well what are we standing here for? I came to your game to support you, not just because you threatened me with your bat. ], [They pant heavily, before realizing it was all a nightmare. I cantake getting kicked out of family activities and being locked out of my room, but being locked out of my own home? ", (Vanzilla is parked in the driveway. Lucy. Well thanks [Sam then kissed Luna on the cheek. [Later, Lincoln and his family were sitting in the living room when the doorbell rang. I'm calling the cops! She smiled as Lincoln took it. During the drive, there was nothing but silence, which is very uncommon for a vehicle that is usually occupied by 13 people. No self-insert oc this time. Upload your creations for people to see, favourite, and share. It was never fun but I'm glad it's over." Ruth responded back, clearly mad too. Am. I'm not. He managed to, but with a twist. Luan added. (Bursts into tears). ", Baseball Announcer: "The windup, the pitch. SQUIRRELS WIN! Fund your creativity by creating subscription tiers. Not. Fool Me Twice extended ending10. Understood?!" I don't even care about that anymore. Hey guys, I'm sorry I was so horrible. Lincoln: Stop it! My first story is done. I plan to do some more humorous parodies and some other stories that aren't going to be as serious as this one, so be on the lookout for that. I'll admit, it was stupid and wrong of me to lie to them and take advantage of it, and I probably should've just told them that I just wanted some me time, but honestly, I think this is way more than I deserve. (The sisters tear up over their passions being so heavily insulted) I hate it that you lowlifes never learn a thing! And then blew more raspberries and spit on them some more (hopefully the last author interruption but if not then I'll let you know: I know her seat is located in the first row behind the driver in canon but for this instance of going along with not wanting to look at their parents, the siblings put Lily's seat in the far back to help the other siblings not have to look at their parents, I know this is a little wrong, but please understand it shows how mad the siblings are). I cant believe you all locked me outside and sold all my things! ", Baseball Announcer: "Just look at our poor squirrels! The Loud siblings appeared in the lobby, completely red in the face, as angry as a bull seeing red and they looked ready to destroy everything in their path. Some sisters those ghouls are. ", Lincoln: (to his parents) "What kind of parents lock their own child out? Some blonde girl in a green dress gave us a room key and told us to enjoy our time here." She hugged him back.] Lincoln grabs 11 squirrel mascots and put them on his parents and sisters, minus Lily.]. Especially with the ending, so I created this story to give it a better ending. Lincoln: Im sorry this happened. If you didn't show up, I don't want to think about what would've happened." Just because of superstitions?! Lola: We are your family, we do want you, we promise! (looks at Lincoln with a smile and puts a hand on his shoulder) "All of us. They sold his furniture and forced him to wear a squirrel costume to bring them good luck.) Leni asked, an eyebrow raised, confused. Lynn Sr.: Come on, let's go find Lincoln! They suddenly feel saddened, guilty, broken and worried. I hate clowning! Lincoln: I said NO! ", Lola: (with a sad look on her face) "No. Later, in jail). Everything is going wrong with the Squirrels today. We feel so ashamed! They go flying, screaming in terror and splash into the seawater.). Everyone awed over this.] WE DESERVE TO BE HURT!!!! "Do you have any idea how guilty you made us feel for possibly ruining your vacation for acting like ourselves?" Lincoln: No! ", Lola:[to the mascot] "Um, do you mind, fur ball? Lana said, glaring at her parents. This Fanfic is a MASSIVE critique on every fanfic that is targeting the Episode "No Such Luck" of the Western Animation Series "The Loud House." No Such Luck Alternate ending (Bad) Deviation Actions. ", Lucy: "After all, it's not like we always go to each others events 100% of the time, so why should you? What kind of family would do this to one of their own? One of his friends added, "We're not messing with you. (Inhales, then exhales) "I. Im melting! Find out what other deviants think - about anything at all. Lincoln turned to Lori and said, "I think we should call Aunt Ruth and tell her how we feel." I was being selfish!. Lisa: A terrible case of state of mind if ever I saw one. Actually, there's something I need to do! Spell it out alt ending7. Luna: I dont know. They got their answer when, suddenly, the door the spa was kicked open by someone's shoe. Post an update . I hate golf! The school bell rings at Royal Woods Middle School. Scared as to what will happen if they say something wrong, eventually, Lincoln stepped forward and proceeded to say, "We're really sorry, sir. His sisters join too and put Lynn in her place. Just a head's up. ", "Can I just say that I was only out there because I was accidentally locked out." Can you check on the computer and see who's staying in this room." "YOU KIDS ARE NOTHING BUT TROUBLE AND TO BE HONEST, I WAS GLAD WHEN YOUR PARENTS DECIDED TO TAKE YOU TO THAT HOTEL BECAUSE I COULDN'T STAND THE THOUGHT OF BEING STUCK WITH YOU MONSTERS FOR TWO DAYS!" ENOUGH!!! WE RUINED OUR WHOLE FAMILY!!! "Gross and immature, if you ask me," Lola said, also glaring at her parents. Taking the device out of the girl's hand. We would never force you to go if you don't want to. Ruthless People extended ending13. [Later, Lincolns room is unlocked and his furnature was back. You didn't deserve to win that stupid game or any game! Lynn Sr. stuttered for a few moments and said, "Ground us?! Upload stories, poems, character descriptions & more. Immediately, everyone started running or hiding to avoid getting caught in the crosshairs of their destruction. Mentioning their Aunt Ruth's bunions caused the siblings to gag, before returning back to normal and glaring at their parents. "Now go to your room," Lori said, pointing to their parents' bedroom, but when they still sat on the couch feeling guilty, she yelled, "NOW!" Lincoln: I don't believe it! They were wondering how could this room be these three idiots, they were booked until tomorrow. Thats not how it works! Ive covered for you guys, ive done you all favours, ive gotten you out of trouble, ive spent time with you and this is how you all repay me!?!? I hate boring science lectures! ", [The family and Bobby cheer for Lynn as she makes her run around the field. He gives her bat a furious glare, smashes it in half and throws it out the window. This whole trip their parents were telling them to behave and they got grounded when they didn't, but now they're learning that they did something to cause them to be kicked out of the hotel after only one day. Speaking of, I plan to do another alternate ending to another Loud House episode, the ending for it might have been wholesome and good, I just feel that the events that happen in the episode could've been prevented if the siblings did this, that's all I'm going to say. Lincoln then explains to the viewers that with ten sisters, his schedule is always filled up, and . "They have a point there honey," Lynn Sr. said, before immediately clasping his mouth shut, his wife glaring at him for saying that. Even you Lisa! Now, let me make this clear!

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